Lily Lake is spelled wrong
Do you really think subtitles are necessary here? I understand that he's talking fast and he has braces, but it might almost seem insulting to this poor kid, and I don't want Mama Bears in the room to react to that.
If you understand it, I'm good. Removed.
I thought this comment was a little odd. Is he suggesting that when they study Romeo and Juliet in other ways, like with dramatic battles, that they might get hurt? I worry that this is going to make people stop to think about what he's saying, and they won't follow along with the rest of the video.
Can we use the Partnership Plan logo here rather than the Partnership Party logo?
The end of his comment stopped me. I didn't know what he meant about the students being able to explore pitched battles and percussiveness "without any consequence to themselves." It stopped me, and my mind drifted off, wondering what he meant by that. Were they doing dramatic renderings of the battles and were students getting hurt? I don't want the audience's attention to wander down that alley during the video, wondering what he meant. Can you make an adjustment?
Elementary is spelled wrong.